Friday, September 11, 2009

For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

You touched with healing fingers,
the soul that writhed in pain,
You stroked where memories linger,
of the heart that bore her name.
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Laurie hill
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Linda Ori 17 September 2009

Short but powerful. When one door closes another opens, and that is evident in this poem. Beautifully written from a place of knowing. Nothing is ever beyond love. Linda

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Patrick A. Martin 17 September 2009

I can but stand with the others, who have commented, and applaud Bravo, Bravo! 10

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T S 17 September 2009

Beautiful just Beautiful Laurie as I said before you have a wonderful talent. 10 +++++++

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Meggie Gultiano 14 September 2009

beautiful! ! i just love this

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There is so much sensitivity in this poem Laurie. The words you use create such beautiful images. To touch and heal the soul, to stroke the heart and heal memories all create a feeling of peace. 10 love Karin

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Smiley Hooker 12 September 2009

hmm...you finally found someone, my friend-lol! very nice! :)

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Ted M 12 September 2009

Lovely words these, nice topic too..

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Sonya Florentino 11 September 2009

just brings a smile to a face... seems like you've found a Florence Nightingale for the soul..... :)

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Patti Masterman 11 September 2009

This is so lovely and elegantly worded.

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