For You. Comments

Our eyes sealed with an everlasting obsession.Beautiful Superb

The soft coiled mist. Nice work.

the illusions of love and life

I consider this a well written love letter addressed to a lovely damsel, a love letter that is not written in standard form but in poetry form. I should say in prose and that makes it more romantic. Well done, mate.10+

Beautiful narration. nicely composed. great thought.10++++

A nice love letter for her in poetry form well written.

Its a nice composition. ofcourse 10/10.

This wud b embodied n fashioned. It is reflecting Khalilgibran's poem.nice.

it's a different mindscape that's projected here...enjoyed reading, young man!

Haunting story of dream in a mist is well expressed to muse over in loneliness!

An excellent encounter with dreams in reality with love inspired thanks for the invite+++++10 regards

“For you”…it is a message of different meaning according to who will read it. However I am sure that the author has his own message- the message that is really the reason why he wrote it. Indeed, allow me to say that your poem is fitting to different angles of life’s reality. It could be love for man and woman, or a feeling/desire of deep devotion to someone; while it could be the love of God to his creation… It is deep and meaningful…nice one. and for you dear poet...all the best. thanks

'You laughed and cried and never whispered goodbye, It was a staggering day though full of passionate sighs'... these lines are very much poetic...most i liked in this write...thanks...10

a very nice poem with full of feelings..

This poem is extremely well-written. It seems to be either a chance encounter or a figment of your imagination- this woman. You could post it on Craigslist in the Missed Connections section - put a link to your poems. I don't mean that to reflect negatively on your poem it just seems fitting.

Well, my dear poet friend...A true and sincere explanation, that defines love from your point of view...I agree with what you'd written...beautifully penned...bravo 10+

its a masterpiece i can say a fine poem from such a young poet 10+++