Monday, July 24, 2006

For Who Knows Loneliness Comments

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Pull back a long way, plant your feet,
Consider Loneliness from afar
Keep steady gaze until he grows familiar.
Your look eases the fear, your unease too
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Raynette Eitel 04 August 2006

Frank, you have really captured loneliness here, but I do love your last stanza with its colorful hope. 'The rainbows of your soul that shine in empty rooms.' I'll try to remember that when I'm lonely. Raynette

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Ruby Root 31 July 2006

This is so sad Frank, I love your love poetry better. This can make anyone run. Yes lonliness is sad but I think if you enjoy life and things around it does help. I try not to feel that way. It only messes me up more. Take care Frank.

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Pia Andersson 26 July 2006

Its not easy to write about lonliness...to look beyond and try to figur out why we have those feelings of loneliness, even in a crowded room...You are a brave knight..this poem is so good and so true...Pia

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