For Us: Comments

10/10 from me. This poem is beautiful! Just starting off is the hardest part... especially if you didn't know that person for awhile. Sorry it took me so long to comment... I've not been in using distance of a computer lol. I hope this person is Mr Right for you. Keep writing Rissa: -)

Beginnings can be joyful and promising, but, as you say in the end, they can also be disappointing. Lots of feeling in your poem.

i think it was really nice, however personally i think that the end part about never meeting wasnt necessary. it was such a sweet poem, if only it didnt have to end.

That's beautiful. I've had that feeling before too.l Great writing.

yeah, sometimes i feel that way too

nice poem kaila keep on writing