Wednesday, August 5, 2015

For Toby Comments

Rating: 5.0

My favourite moment, our evening drill,
Begins with our climb up the steep wooden hill,
Like two little monkeys we jump into bed
We share the same pillowcase head touching head,
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Jimmy Inlow
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Charity Nduhiu 25 August 2015

I like the romance in the poem. Nice write I like.

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Chinedu Dike 13 August 2015

Lovely and very romantic piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart. A heartwarming poem depicting pure bliss of love. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing Jimmy. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 05 August 2015

A very touching poem, Jimmy. Thanks

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 August 2015

lovely write, Jimmy. Thanks for sharing

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