Friday, June 17, 2011

For This Earth We Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have seen children flying
through the air of fear
i have heard adults lying
sure, then i felt that tear
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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