Tuesday, April 1, 2008

For The Unachievable Fragment Comments

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There is a verse
missing from my unfinished song.
A melody is lacking
to complete the music.
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Melissa Hurst
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There will be always something unachievable! What a delicate sensitiveness in this poem.

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Don Mcwilliams 01 April 2008

Well done, Melissa, conveys a real sense of longing. Don

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Malini Kadir 01 April 2008

unique thoughts in verse.....liked it very much thank you!

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