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For The Sake Of Self Or Soul Comments

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Some say, man's made of dreams born of desires,
Some swear he has a soul of sacrifice.
Cravings that kindle fire create quagmires,
And man ends up paying a heavy price.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Terry Craddock 19 November 2020

Part 2 some men create built sow peace seeds enrich life the world is blessed when passion driven desires dreams are devoted to harmony peace prosperity not wars not destruction greed possession cruelties Inspired by the poem 'For The Sake Of Self Or Soul' by the poet Aniruddha Pathak. Dedicated to the poet Aniruddha Pathak.

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Terry Craddock 19 November 2020

Part 1 Born Driven By Dreams Desires some men are born driven by visions dreams desires pursuit of self promotion passions fuels competitive fires some men will lay down their lives in service to others regardless of race religion social status claim all as brothers some men are tempest storms causing wild havoc destruction strife

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Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

some men are born driven by dreams desires, pursuit of self promotion passions fuels competitive fires, some men will lay down their lives in service to others, regardless of race religion social status claim all as brothers, some men are tempest storms causing havoc destruction strife, some men create built sow peace seeds enrich life, the world is blessed when passion driven desires dreams, are devoted to harmony peace prosperity not wars destruction greed possession cruelties

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Valsa George 02 November 2020

There is a golden mean between self and altruism! Killing the self is possible only for sages and saints! An ordinary man has to satisfy his self moderately without allowing his greed to take over! A mature view of life is beautifully expressed!

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Budhashaya Behera 30 October 2020

Soul gains light if Lord plays flute wth sweet sensation. I hear Lord's tune in your poem. Hare Krishan, Hare Krishna!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2020

Man should do duty's deed in perfect manner in righteous way. Dreams and desires are born in amazing way. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned.

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