For The One I Love Comments

nicely described. simply stated..

Wow dat wuz beautiful described and introduced in such little words I hope ur heart gets pu back togther it seems broken great job! ! ! 10++

Drain the oceans it will again return look untill you find it it will be your turn...iip

Sad write sorry Lisa

Hi whatchamacallit....in your experience of life you must mean your mum cos she's worth it.. regards

I actually like this short poem. Write some more poems for me to read. I still do not know what your name is. I can relate to you much better if you give me a real name.