Wednesday, November 4, 2020

For The New Comments

Rating: 4.9

For the new
on the rolling earth
The adventurous mind
Yes, I need
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Anjandev Roy 29 August 2022

Excellent piece........thank u dear friend....

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BRITTE NINAD 28 February 2021

But I like your open hearted greetings to all

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BRITTE NINAD 28 February 2021

All new welcome to the the dimension of your ultra platform of love!

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

about the independent poetic writing this poem is alsoe good expressing.........God bless you

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'The Pen Is Stationary The Pen Looks Innocent', inspired by the poem 'For The New', by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE; with quotations from the poem, 'Moment In Time*', by the poet Terence George Craddock.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 November 2020

Beautiful thoughts wonderfully versified. Loved these lines, to wit; " Because of the pen Poetry Does not know how to stop." Yes, Poetry carries its own magic. Beautifully written with great images. Five Stars! ! !

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Suresh Kumar Ek 08 November 2020

The new intution of independence seeker Is powerfully painted in this poem

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Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

'Need to travel me To cure my pen' this reminded me, pens do travel, signing documents, treaties, creating war or peace, pens can travel too far when signing ill advised documents 'The flash of the president’s pen deals with the life of men. Starting a war settling a score all happens so far away.' this reminded me of the poem 'Moment In Time', sometimes powerful people need to think for more than a moment hours days about consequences

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o poet me poet yeps poet 05 November 2020

Because of the pen of poetry does not know how to stop excellent mb

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 November 2020

A well crafted poem.... Truly magnificent and brilliant...5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2020

'I like to travel but without arriving anywhere Because of the pen of poetry does not know how to stop' - When a poet's pen stops, he lives no more. A poet has a myriad of destinations, yet he arrives 'nowhere'!

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Varsha M 04 November 2020

The adventurous mind of the pen comes out from the prevalent dark den without fixing any trend to enjoy all thru wisdom shower for the new independent intuition seeker.....yes beautiful words in ode to pen. Indeed pen is that way only just serving the purpose.

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 November 2020

Let your mind breath and may your pen write the truth. Never compromise for anything and anyone. Very nice thought Mahtab.10***

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