For The Moment, This Is Love Comments

very good poem Uriah.. i liked the darkness into it, it makes it uniquely graphic! HBH

Very graphic and dark, but also quite well written. I like that you were not afraid to approach such a difficult subject.

Excellent poem. I just deleted one called Life in the Dark Lane, too graphic. H

Uriah, I really like this, it has an honesty that moves me, Sx

Interesting...I liked the way you set this one up...the slightly longer lines in the beginning and then the shorter ones. Good one!