For The Man That I Love Comments
Write me a song for the man that I love
Say, could his heart be mine?
There as I stare the world far away
All that I see can't say
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Write me a song for the man that I love Say, could his heart be mine? There as I stare the world far away All that I see can't say- - - - - - - - - - - - A fine expression of restless heart, being away from the lover, questioning oneself- Does he love me? Does he know my love for him? How I wish he knew my love? Oh sky, oh river, oh wind, just tell him about my love. Perhaps this poem inspired Daniel Brick to write A Song for the Man I love.
Thank you so very much for your beautiful words, dear Bharati Nayak! ! Thank you! ! Thank you for notifying me for the wonderful poem of dear Daniel Brick! ! If it is indeed inspired by my poem, I'm so very honoured, moved, blessed and happy! ! Thank you! !
you almost tempted me into writing a poem... :) quite a tantalizing and appealing poem... a nit of a dilemma... but thats what life is... there is bit of intensity...a bit of wistfulness.. a bit of feminine restraint...and yes... a bit of red...thumbs contextually and content wise... poetic and nicely put... liked
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A cute piece I wish my woman would dedicate such a piece to me
A beautiful poem for love....! Poem represents the heat of poet/poetess..... It showing that how much strong is ur feeling for the things(love, emotions, etc...) you have written a lovely poem for your love......I really enjoyed it....! Best of Luck....
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Your poem depicts the innocence and intense love of the young, the underlying hope of having someone's love in return to call your own. Very well illustrated through your words, it was like a video in my mind, where I could see and feel the emotions and feelings coming from your heart. Wonderfully brilliant poem, Aphrodite! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Thank you truly, dear Roseann! ! ! Thank you! ! ! I'm very happy you enjoyed my poem! !
A very nice love song unfolding feelings of agony. I loved it!
Aphrodite, I've sent you a msg (an invitation) . Let me know. Will you? Ciao
Beautiful composition, Aphrodite. A small correction: Write me a song for the man I love
Once again on the poem.The agony of the simmering soul out of flaming love is expressed effectively by the repetition of the same question, which at the end by a slight alteration expresses by the sames time the wish for the mutual feeling so that this lobe be the ideal love ecpected by any creature in the world.The incoherent syntax used gives you the impression of the hurrying soul, heart to reach what she mostly ecpectsas soon as possible, that is why prefered to be analogous.
Every time I come back and read this poem which impressed me from ''first sight', I do realize that I have been fallen in love with it {who ever loved who did not love from first sight? ].In the simplest, physical way it pictures the tenderness of a simmering soul living the passionate agony of its expectations, Just to know, just to know, nothing else, only the hope, the hope only, a passion bejond common love affairs, the love of love, just to see it existing, or better to get a sign that something great as hoped may, may happen.It would be enough for the innocent soul which opens wings to the heavens of ideal mutual feelings.In my life I can not remember a text like that describing the shivering of a soul except that of Plato in Symposion but being a prose it does not what does your poem, dear Aphroite, it makes you feel the feeling it is painting in front of your soul.It will be loved by everyone who will have the privilege to read it.
Dear Mr.Galanis, I read your comment again and again, and I can hardly find the words to thank you enough for your wonderfully encouraging and poetic comment… Not only you’ve caught the very essence of the poem but you’ve also looked into the heart of its author. It truly honours me. Thank you! ! Thank you so much! !
Mr Galanis, there are 1000s of extremely well expressed romantic poems written in the Greek language, by skillful classical and modern writers. The Symposium by Plato, does not describe the shivering of a soul as you have claimed but a place of entertainment and philosophical discussion. The present poem belongs to the category of prose, too, as well as your own compositions do. All not metrical compositions, sir, are called prose.
Write me a song for the man that I love Say, could his heart be mine? Hope that his voice could once sing for me Say, could that man love me? … a beautiful love letter full of desire and passion to be loved by him. very nice poem full of love. thank you very much. i was moved by your introduction in PH and all your likes, music, writing, horseriding and final thoughts. i will not pretend. thank you. liked very much. tony
Thank you so much for your comment, Dr. Brahmin! Very glad you enjoyed my poem!
The tenderness of a loving heart in ambiguity nicely penned.[Hoping to see his eyes=Hoping his eyes to see /to fit the rythm]
Thank you so much sir! ! ! :) So happy you liked it! ! Thank you for the advice too! !
Thanks For sharing Aphrodite, If You Ever have time Check out some of my poems I would enjoy your input =)
Thank you, Laquory Jones! :) I would love to read your poetry! Thank you!
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7/21/2025 4:10:30 AM # 1.0.0
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very passionate with strong emotions.. Powerfully and movingly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Thank you very much for your kind words! ! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!