It soars by dawn, by dusk it sighs
In heart it dwells, in head it cries
seeking aide while in trade
dreams are dreams, though betrayed. (4)
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Thank you, for looking at my poems. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme of both of your works, and am quite envious of the fact that you are writing freely, even though you rhyme most of your sentences.
a great piece of work! ! ! ! ! looking forward for more of you! ! !
A sublime start with a nice poem, Nivedita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you