I was young and naïve
When it all started.
Yet I knew what was happening
And it left me broken hearted.
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Its sad very sad......thats nothing i want to say......as far as poetry is concern...nicely highlighted the pain
i just want you to know that you are a very strong and brave girl. i went through the same thing with my parents, and i know how it feels. i know how it feels to put a smile on your face even though all you want to do is cry.
Serena, to know this occurs and you still managing to hold yourself in magnitude. It shows immense strength, you are a courageous person. This entitles all of those who face this problem around the world. Kudos to you, this is truly monodrous while also magnificeint
Serena... dont have words to say how good you wrote this.... though i feel sad after reading this....