Tuesday, May 19, 2009

For The Long Haul Comments

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I have no doubt that passion is a strong factor
That the love and compatability is there
But is commitment part of the equation?
Do I event want you for the long haul?
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 01 June 2009

I love that June, thank you. I feel that it is helped by the assymetric form but it's the words themselves that radiate depth of feeling. An enjoyable read!

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