I have no doubt that passion is a strong factor
That the love and compatability is there
But is commitment part of the equation?
Do I event want you for the long haul?
Do you even want me for the long haul?
I know that your body longs for me each time
But do you see me as I really am?
Do you like what you see?
Do you even like me?
And most important: do you respect me?
Sometimes I feel that you only see my physical beauty that is my curse and my Blessing.
And this beauty is fleeting, but my heart and soul, they are eternal.
5/19/09
2: 35 pm
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love that June, thank you. I feel that it is helped by the assymetric form but it's the words themselves that radiate depth of feeling. An enjoyable read!