For The Long Haul Poem by June FeirCruz

For The Long Haul



I have no doubt that passion is a strong factor
That the love and compatability is there
But is commitment part of the equation?
Do I event want you for the long haul?
Do you even want me for the long haul?

I know that your body longs for me each time
But do you see me as I really am?
Do you like what you see?
Do you even like me?
And most important: do you respect me?

Sometimes I feel that you only see my physical beauty that is my curse and my Blessing.
And this beauty is fleeting, but my heart and soul, they are eternal.

5/19/09
2: 35 pm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Les Derbyshire 01 June 2009

I love that June, thank you. I feel that it is helped by the assymetric form but it's the words themselves that radiate depth of feeling. An enjoyable read!

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