Friday, November 17, 2017

For The Girlchild Comments

Rating: 5.0

To this brokeness of women, the world flopped and flipped out.
How life flawed and tampered the ice of the girlchild!
How green became red images to their eyes is still a misery to our flammable fable eyes:
of happiness gallopping towards sorrow,
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John Chizoba Vincent
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 17 December 2017

Beautiful picture shared, so beautiful is the poem. 10. Congrats for the poem being picked POD.

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James Mclain 17 December 2017

I couldn't agree more.. with the comments below.. James McLain

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 December 2017

Oh! what a tribute, accolade, honor, recognition, and commendation paid to the worth and achievements of girl-children........outstanding piece deserves P.O.D............thanks for sharing

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Tom Allport 17 December 2017

a wonderful poem highlighting the need for change for we are all born equal yet woman's inequality still goes on? well written John

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 December 2017

The picture given is beautiful. A full vote for you John.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2017

Of tomorrow unknown! ! Africa! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 December 2017

What a wonderful poem John. A poem on Girl Child with profound thoughts and powerful expression. Loved the last verse. To quote: You are golds to the eyes Your are the gleaming sky... You are the song in our throats splitting into cities of great wordiators. To this world, we'll listen to this love notes rendered with a calm voice, For you're the world itself. Congratulations John. A great poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 December 2017

John, such a brilliant write. Congrats for being chosen...a huge 10+++

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Hassan Hayati 17 December 2017

Impressive content plus well Blank verses has made this poem perfect. This poem makes us think of these Mercies of God more than ever. I also like the picture which adds to the value of this poem. Congratulations for being the poem of the day.

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John Chizoba Vincent

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