Tuesday, October 11, 2016

For The Girl You Are Comments

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I started off with short hair,
Curly, cut and cute like you,
I ended up with a long wig,
Tangled and tied at the back,
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Seamus O Brian 08 November 2016

Profoundly significant insight. What was once commonly understood is no longer, so the deft deliverance of your message is that much more necessary and important. Certainly an enjoyable, as well as wise, work of poetry. Thank you! NB

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 19 October 2016

Then I learned the lesson, It was not about the outside, But about the inside that I am. - I loved these line, they relate almost to everyone besides girls. Thank you Sara, for sharing this one.

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