Friday, July 3, 2009

For The Girl In The Shelter Comments

Rating: 2.9

Brick by brick
we are building a future
with our own hands -
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Jacqui Thewless
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Marieta Maglas 05 July 2009

nice poem.......well written

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Adi Cox 05 July 2009

I can see that the scaffolding of your poetic voice is many storeys high. A building site of ideas, as each brick tells a different story. Your trowel trade skills have a towering effect. What I am trying to say is 'I like your poem'.10/10

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Jacqui Thewless

Jacqui Thewless

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