Thursday, August 23, 2012

For The Death Of A Friend Comments

Rating: 3.0

Dani you are in the hearts of many,
A true friend that's hard to find,
You have many qualities,
That no one could of out shined!
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Richard Goolsby
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Ryan Walker 28 August 2012

It's rough... but it certainly has potential in the lines... Personally, I find rhyme without metre to be a bit cumbersome, but it's an interesting topic... it just seems a bit rough. Which is nothing bad, considering you have a good start.

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