It's rough... but it certainly has potential in the lines... Personally, I find rhyme without metre to be a bit cumbersome, but it's an interesting topic... it just seems a bit rough. Which is nothing bad, considering you have a good start.
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It's rough... but it certainly has potential in the lines... Personally, I find rhyme without metre to be a bit cumbersome, but it's an interesting topic... it just seems a bit rough. Which is nothing bad, considering you have a good start.