Tuesday, August 2, 2005

For The Country I Love Comments

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I fell in love with a country once.
An entire land mass embodied by a single face.
His face, it enchanted me.
Passions full, so much to go around.
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Jennifer Strubel
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sheila knowles 02 August 2005

This was a very emotional read...sort of a heavy breathing poem...in a good way. I like when a poem does that for me. I always like the interesting run forward an run back lines you have at stages...that adds to the frantic and confused emotional pace...all in all...really nice work.

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