You left me floating in eternity,
Clinging to lost promises,
The more I cling the more I lose,
Of your warmth and love,
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i was asked to write this poem for a friend and i did. she gave me the idea and the outline of what she wanted. i wrote this for her and i hope it reaches her expectations as she deserves nothing less.
i do admire poets making beautiful pieces like taken from somebody's feelings/idea... honestly, i cant create a poem not unless iv got the full emotion over something.... excellent job here! =)