Monday, December 19, 2005

For The Broken Heart Of Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

You left me floating in eternity,
Clinging to lost promises,
The more I cling the more I lose,
Of your warmth and love,
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Holly Heron
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Scarlet Red 16 August 2006

i do admire poets making beautiful pieces like taken from somebody's feelings/idea... honestly, i cant create a poem not unless iv got the full emotion over something.... excellent job here! =)

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Raven Keller 21 December 2005

It surpassed her expectations :)

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Holly Heron 19 December 2005

i was asked to write this poem for a friend and i did. she gave me the idea and the outline of what she wanted. i wrote this for her and i hope it reaches her expectations as she deserves nothing less.

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