For The Broken Heart Of Her Comments

i do admire poets making beautiful pieces like taken from somebody's feelings/idea... honestly, i cant create a poem not unless iv got the full emotion over something.... excellent job here! =)

It surpassed her expectations :)

i was asked to write this poem for a friend and i did. she gave me the idea and the outline of what she wanted. i wrote this for her and i hope it reaches her expectations as she deserves nothing less.