Friday, April 5, 2019

For The Art Of Poetry.... Comments

Rating: 4.6

I shall compose a Song for thee
a loveliest Song of my Heart
each day I will do the best part
to feel the least suppressed me
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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PREMKUMAR C N 22 November 2023

Let's create in this greatest poetry home where we all live beneath one dome. Excellent rhyme and beautiful lines.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 November 2022

In the second stanza, the first line: about the birds, bees and the butterliesThis must be of course Butterflies, thank you

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Indira Renganathan 09 November 2021

Too good and well realized write....said all is true and Truth only...highly applaudable...top score

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Nabakishore Dash 15 October 2021

All lines are highly philosophical.To sleep with ease and never run, hate lines are really to be followed in every body's life.Well crafted Ma'am.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2021

A great poem with powerful insight. A poetic gem. To my Poem List.

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Anjandev Roy 13 January 2021

Brilliant work....like it.

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Martin Greyford 04 January 2021

why cannot we respect each other and why constantly be better than the other? it's something that we need to do rather than fighting to be the best in life. nice and beautifully arranged trying to make us understand the importance of equality.

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Susheela Shiju 27 December 2020

Beautifully penned dear

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Dr. Antony Theodore 26 December 2020

I shall compose a Song for thee a loveliest Song of my Heart each day I will do the best part to feel the least suppressed me. a fine poem indeed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2021

Thank you for your precious compliment

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Duke Perry Abrokwa 25 December 2020

Poetry is a our safe heaven. Love it. Thanks for sharing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 December 2020

Beautifully written and conveyed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 December 2020

A great poem that conveys meaningful message to humanity.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 December 2020

A great poem that conveysea

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 December 2020

A powerful and insightful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 June 2020

about the birds, bees and the butterlies about knowledge, honesty, but never about lies about hope, happiness, love and peace then each night we'll go asleep with ease. I shall compose a poem about all these...... it will be a heartfelt poem. thank you dear Sylvia. tony

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Thank you so much dear Dr. Tony Always grateful for your valuable responses and the precious visits and your special 10.. Abundant joy in my momentum for your great support now, Dr. Tony! God's Greatest Blessings in all things you do With the very best wishes from The Netherlands, Sylvia FC

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Luz Hanaii 01 December 2019

Love the greatest thing of all, love a high energy which brings us peace and good rest. Inspiring words dear friend.

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Thank you so much for your inspiring responses right now, dear poetess Luz Hanaii. Good Responses inspire me constantly. I thank you again now. God's Wonderful Blessings may fall upon you. Your precious visit appreciated very much.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 April 2019

no competitions with your beloved one just telling truths of the day, none obsolete you will feel sweet emotions as the day has gone..../// it's so beautiful feelings, touches me lovingly

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Thank you so much for your great response and cute compliments, Mahtab! I like them very very much, adorable!

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Flower Prince 09 April 2019

Wow@ wow! This poem deserves full and big big 10. You have composed the song of heart and now I compose too a song to sing like you. Stage of art for all. Thank you nice poetess for sharing this.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 April 2019

Thank you so much for your great compliments and the precious 10, Flower. Happiest to have presented this Song. If I may say: I am constantly happiest after having created a correct poem. T.Q.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 April 2019

Ever such beauty and heart! .. And ever so beautifully expressed! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ........................+++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 April 2019

Thank you so much, dear Becca, your precious visit is a blessing and your comments most appreciated. Thank you for the generous 10. Non-comparable.

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Sandra Feldman 07 April 2019

Fabulous! Beautifully felt and grandiose! We and the World, As it should be A impeccable poem, That lets us hope That one day, So it shall be, And not just A wonderful Poet's Fantasy. A magnificent, universal poem, endless in good feelings and time.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 April 2019

Thank you so much from my being for these marvelous comments and great response in verse, impressive, very artistic and loveliest. I feel me blessed by your precious presence.

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