Saturday, September 24, 2005

For Susan A Comments

Rating: 3.5

The tale told
Of broken dreams
Of words spilling
Searching, and soaked
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Adrian Wait
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John Kay 24 September 2005

Adrian...there's something powerful going on here, but I'm missing its essence, I think, because of the abstractions like soul, hope, spirit, and life. I'm a lazy reader and need to get deeper into a poem on the first reading than this one allowed.

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