I stole my smile
with my own negative thoughts,
I tricked my eyes
with my own false images,
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Nate, I wonder if your poetry here is inspired by mental illness you have yourself or have observed in others. Hmm? bri ;)
It is a combination of both Bri... I tend to focus on myself but I have also written a few from an objective perspective too. And I write about them to draw awareness to the phenomenon and try to erase some of the negative stigmas too.
Really good poetry Nate! Poetry is a great way for us to express ourselves and we can get so much out of it in return I have found.
Thanks Brook, and yes, this poem is one of my favorite and rewarding poem... thanks for reading it
Good writing skills
Thank you, I really appreciate and value it.