Tuesday, September 4, 2007

For Sale: Hopes, Dreams And Aspirations Comments

Rating: 4.3

Gone are her ambitions,
she lost them along with the fifty pounds.
They just seemed to disappear overnight
like a deadbeat dad.
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Amanda Lukas
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Andre Yates 06 September 2007

Very good poem on how easily something can over take your life and dreams.

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Goldy Locks 04 September 2007

I did. We have all felt like this. you have a strong/skilled way of expressing pains, hesitations, doubts, fears ~ whether they be your own or another's. for every low low low, there's a high high high. always an equal. find yours. best care, sjg note: spelling - check.

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Amanda Lukas

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