Thursday, May 31, 2018

For Richard Comments

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richard struggles in his life.
he's thought about running away
from this life every day this week.
he dreams of wide open spaces
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 June 2018

i have seen a kind of desperation in richard's eyes; i try to tell him i understand him but he just blinks his days away; stacking rocks, making walls. giving positive dreams to others is our life.. it gives us a sense of gratification. be creative and help others to come out from their own depressive thinking.......... as a poet you have this sublime duty. tony

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Douglas Scotney 31 May 2018

a mouse perhaps is Richard, though there are a few things in the poem only another mouse could know

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