Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, April 20, 2020

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Monday,20th April 2020

human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Marker 22 April 2020

I give this 0. Should be deleted.

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Rat Brain 22 April 2020

#156 on top poets what a joke site. Why would anyone want to play here?

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i reached to 77 even

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 April 2020

perfection can never be the reality of course, there can be improvement in quality science and technology has near perfection with daily induction of the precision.. Thinking of perfection. very good poem. tony

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Catherine Habbie 22 April 2020

Congratulations on being vselecse as the poet of the day. A beautiful poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 April 2020

perfection is praised but not literally chased// yeah exactly; right you are Sir; congrats; always 10+

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Man is made imperfect so as to provoke him to attain perfection. Activities of man to attain perfection is life. Let man live.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2020

Perfection! ! ! To attain the truth! ! Musing along with righteous laws; However mankind was made to learn! Overcoming the odds, Able to become perfect one day. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2020

it is all imperfection of mind to ponder over.. hasmukh mehta

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Ramesh T A 22 April 2020

Trying for perfection in art or science, one achieves great feat to the appreciation of all! Congratulations, my friend for the selection your poem as Poem of the Day PH!

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Doggy Daws 22 April 2020

As a dog I can't understand what this rubbish is about. Have you ever learnt English?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 April 2020

human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection had it been the purpose of perfection! God might have not put the evil friends inside and afforded the leniency of providing freedom..... fantastic beginning with nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Hypocrite''s Are Us 22 April 2020

I bet you say that to all the boys.

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Chealsey Marou 22 April 2020

Rather than every month, your poems should be featured every second day. This will show readers how unbiased the administration is.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 April 2020

For perfection-Reaction Monday,20th April 2020 human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection had it been the purpose of perfection! ..............................What a lovely start of the poem that is chosen TODAY as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! CONGRATULATIONS, Hasmukh Sir. ONLY I do not know what you meant with: " science and technology has near perfection" . Must this not be in the plural " have" ? Thank you!

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Fantasia 22 April 2020

Your poem is a definition of perfection. Only Shakespeare would recognise such brilliance. You should be # 2 in the world. We are so lucky to have you on this site. Perfect diction and grammar from an Indian perspective. Us English speakers must learn from you. Then, we can speak like you.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2020

even though very kind in acts perfection is praised but not literally chased Hasmukh Mehta

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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