For Paul Blackburn Comments

i agree totally, what i can't understand is why is †?? world system of justice Ap? equity failing?

Great poem. It runs together very well. Easy to read, and it has great impact.

From the heart. Well done!

Very unique but sad, it happens too much nowadays, keep it up!

Such a tragic story of injustice. I can sense your passion as you wrote this.. A powerful piece as it's written straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

What a sorrowful life-story beautifully penned by you! Thanks for sharing!

Love this. I love how you tell the story.

Joy to Paul and a happy beginning of new life. It's a soulful write.

A great write of compassion. May justice be served. Paul might not get his childhood back, but they must give recognition of his innocence. You have a great heart, Dave.

Thankyou :) ..........

Your talent powerfully tells this heart breaking story... This is a wonderful poem.

This is an awesome poem. You shouldn't stop writing. You are really good at this. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, This Difficult Life.

Good one, I love it! Read my poem 'Father Africa' to have an insight on how we suffere in the hands of you white men.

Good one, I love it!

Wow.. so powerful, so honest. Such good flow. I could imagine the cell, the boy and all of his pain. Thank you for sharing such a personal piece.

'Tis a great poem! ! ! He lost his joy of childhood that's a truth and no one can bring that back! ! ! A sad poem! ! ! Excellent! ! 10+++

sadly, he can never be paid back for the time lost... but the truth itself has a healing hand! great poem!