For Pain Or Desire Comments

BRAVO! ! ! From one Poet to another, VERY GOOD READ! What you say is true! This piece says it all! you have found the truth in the fine line that we seem to walk each day of our lives! Keep it up! ~Lauren

Very well written! ! ! I have to agree, there is a very fine line between pain and desire, and sometimes they can be both. Its all confusing! ! Keep up the great work, Always, Nick

So long as we be the human ellement...so goes along with it the veins of greed, fear, covet, and yen for superiority....Or so it seems...Well written piece, lass! F J R

Thought provoking to say the least!