Wednesday, September 2, 2009

For P.J. Comments

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Sleep overcame your senses
Chemicals mixed into a lullaby
Inducing silence on this place
I talked but did you really listen?
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Fiona Davidson
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Sid John Gardner. 07 September 2009

A wonderful personal tribute from one person to another who was deeply loved and cared for during ill times. Words can not do justice in describing the piece as it is deep, caring and heartfelt. Sid.

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Sue Sie 04 September 2009

Never two people have I met so brave...one on a journey to the skies...the other to hold her head high with pride.....The love I saw was truley from two big hearts....rest now comes....Your poems are a tribute in themselves for you both to share some comfort in the knowledge that you cared deeply and lovingly... From your best friend...Sue....with love xx

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Fay Slimm 02 September 2009

Love and care truly personified with this Fi... and a means now to a different state for your talented pen - - finishing now, you have brought a period of loving devoted care to the attention of all your readers who will not forget your vigils...... bless your fine spirit - - from Fay....xx

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Carol Gall 02 September 2009

beautiful fi you helped him find the way now rest

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maggie murray 02 September 2009

May this excellent but equally sad poem now bring you some peace Fi, Maggie

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Nikunj Sharma 02 September 2009

this has everything in it, the music, flow, sense, love, touch, poignance and a big heart..... this poem speaks and connects with the readers and transports them to a different world....excellent poem

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