For One More Day Comments

A beautiful composition on the truest of emotions! Keep writing and sharing.

If only I had one more day, no, one more hour nay, one more minute I would have told you that the lines are very touching..........

ooo...what a wonderful pieces u gave to us! ...the end really stabbed my heart, sad but beautiful..if i have some magical wishes to make it true, i will wish u will have another day with her, save the love and make all your word above come true..thanks for sharing.. sweet lullaby

aww this madde me cry becuase i feel the same way: '( i love it

dang thats deep thats what you call a true couple that has true love keep writin your poems are very good: *)

Well-penned....eloquently expressed.

Your heart speaks the dearing words of a lovely poem that showers with longing...and sadness...and content for life...yes, one more day could make a change and make things even better...

thats really sad i think that in time people heal not completely but enough to stay alive

Aw sad at the end but happy at the same time: '] BEAUTIFUL! ! !