For Once I Thought! ! ! Comments

Whatever it takes for you to stand and smile! Your belief and strength to help you with any struggle, will guide you through. You are not soley responsible for all. You show much caring through your words. Your poem shows you try to carry more than your share. Big hearts and deep feelings will always make for great tools in writing. You write to express and share. In this action you will grow. With growth there is change. There will always be more to write about! DC

nice one...so you have a strong belief...thats cool your poem is outstanding and thought are really beyond appreciation...keep writing

hi neeha your last two stanzas say it all only you can help yourself...yes its inside the poem is desperate....dark and melancholy...yet carries a clear messsage of hope and redemption keep writing cheers and welcome