After the last drops of rain, a silence emerges,
spreading as a crescendo of grey melancholy.
I open the window, light a cigarette,
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Beautiful narrative piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much for your kind words :) please stick around for more work to come soon! I'll check your page out right now!
You paint such a peaceful and longing picture, I can almost smell your cigarette mixed with the fresh air after the rain. Good use of metaphor.
I'm so glad that came through for you! it's simple moments like these, observational meditations, that I really enjoy out of life! Happy to hear from you :) will return the favor!