Thursday, October 16, 2025

For Now And Forever— Until The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

Behind is all warmth and light
Around us crowds the darkest night
Behind we left the green shire
Now we tread in a land of thorn and fire
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Timber Koleden
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Rebecca Navarre 20 October 2025

Thank you for sharing this gem! .. Millions of 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 20 October 2025

Wow! .. As the roads turn so dark and cold such beauty and hope your heart holds! .. Ever so inspiring! ..

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Anjandev Roy 17 October 2025

Glorious piece throughout..... with brilliant title....

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Daniel Burns 17 October 2025

Great ultimate line, and great job at recognizing loyalty in each of its forms throughout these three tales. Great picture too!

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Daniel Burns 17 October 2025

Awesome and masterful poem! Through this metaphorically and symbolically rich piece you trace the stories of Lord of the Rings, Narnia and Harry Potter excellently.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2025

Liked the recurring lines at the end of each stanza

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2025

A well thought out and wonderful poem that gives hope and light to those who have burdens in.life. Very touching and inspiring. Well presented with great poetic expressons.

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