Yet we hope to survive for next day
Pray for it and in sleep to go away
To his fold permanently not to be alive
But find next day's bright sun to relive
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Solid Phil Novak48 minutes ago Well written and moves well Comment +2 Nice
Barbara Cadogan17 minutes ago Enjoyed. Comment +1 Good
Yet we hope to survive for next day Pray for it and in sleep to go away
Nice Rhyme! Some improvement needed.