Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, September 4, 2012

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Yet we hope to survive for next day
Pray for it and in sleep to go away
To his fold permanently not to be alive
But find next day's bright sun to relive
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Nice Rhyme! Some improvement needed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Solid Phil Novak48 minutes ago Well written and moves well Comment +2 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Barbara Cadogan17 minutes ago Enjoyed. Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

thomas jerry51 minutes ago I liked the messa

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Yet we hope to survive for next day Pray for it and in sleep to go away

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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