Friday, September 14, 2012

For Nature's Future Comments

Rating: 4.7

For the people around the sea
Storm tries to show a tearful plea
Cryptic genes of angry volcanoes
Awaken again with loud soprano!
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Eindaray Kyaw
COMMENTS
Tapas Baidya 28 September 2012

Hi Eindaray, your poem strongly hammers on our callousness about our environment. Thanks for sharing such burning issue. Tapas, Kolkata, India.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 September 2012

Very nice all to solidarity in protecting our nature and environment. I love this kind of theme which should be a concern for poets, too. Thanks for writing this.

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Antique Aphrodite 17 September 2012

indeed a great artwork..................

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Asif Andalib 16 September 2012

Environment pollution should be considered as a crime and there should be laws in every country to bring the culprits to justice. Nice and timebefitting poem. Thanks for sharing

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Neela Nath Das 16 September 2012

We are idiot so there is green house effect. To make aware is a poet's job too. You are successful, I think.

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Sunny Rose 16 September 2012

Wow...people r too busy livin their lives that they dn't even think 4 their children n their environment they dn't even want to breathe fresh air

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Elena Sandu 16 September 2012

Isn't it strange that human being, can appreciate and love so much the air to be clean but all the same we are the ones to bring the world at end? As long as we don't get rid of the monetary system nothing is going to change for the better. Because greed, will never stop the machines. We are machines for making money. The more we make, the more we spend, the more air particles we are changed into dirt... The only way to protect our world is to stop associating wealth with money...You are right, yes: True wealth is our clean water and air... Wonderful poem,10.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 16 September 2012

Yes, we all should protect the Ozone. what ever we do, we will see the results of our actions. if don't protect it, we will see the results. if we harm it again, we again will see the results. so beautiful and wise keep up the good work.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 September 2012

A deep thought about the environment and a well rendered poem. It's nice to see such a young person write a poem and too so beautifully. May you have a great poetic life ahead Thanks and best wishes.

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Hans Vr 15 September 2012

A very nice and worthy message expressed in this very wise poem. When will we finally listen? I agree verry much with Unwritten Soul that you have lots of talent. Excellent poem

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Unwritten Soul 15 September 2012

Eindaray, thanks for inviting and this poem is such beautiful and creative one..the environment voice is really speak loud by you here...keep writing, you got talent and keep polishing it_Unwritten Soul

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Gjc Brisso 15 September 2012

great job on this piece you most care deeply for the environment

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Aung Si 15 September 2012

Good idea! Your creation is so helpful for nature.Great poem.....!

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Donald Kuutsi 14 September 2012

masterpiece thank u so much u truly care for our environment thank u so much....brilliant creativity masterpice Eindaray..keeep it up dear pal

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Vikram Basu 14 September 2012

woww... really a nice one... this one is so good....

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