For the people around the sea
Storm tries to show a tearful plea
Cryptic genes of angry volcanoes
Awaken again with loud soprano!
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Very nice all to solidarity in protecting our nature and environment. I love this kind of theme which should be a concern for poets, too. Thanks for writing this.
Environment pollution should be considered as a crime and there should be laws in every country to bring the culprits to justice. Nice and timebefitting poem. Thanks for sharing
We are idiot so there is green house effect. To make aware is a poet's job too. You are successful, I think.
Wow...people r too busy livin their lives that they dn't even think 4 their children n their environment they dn't even want to breathe fresh air
Isn't it strange that human being, can appreciate and love so much the air to be clean but all the same we are the ones to bring the world at end? As long as we don't get rid of the monetary system nothing is going to change for the better. Because greed, will never stop the machines. We are machines for making money. The more we make, the more we spend, the more air particles we are changed into dirt... The only way to protect our world is to stop associating wealth with money...You are right, yes: True wealth is our clean water and air... Wonderful poem,10.
Yes, we all should protect the Ozone. what ever we do, we will see the results of our actions. if don't protect it, we will see the results. if we harm it again, we again will see the results. so beautiful and wise keep up the good work.
A deep thought about the environment and a well rendered poem. It's nice to see such a young person write a poem and too so beautifully. May you have a great poetic life ahead Thanks and best wishes.
A very nice and worthy message expressed in this very wise poem. When will we finally listen? I agree verry much with Unwritten Soul that you have lots of talent. Excellent poem
Eindaray, thanks for inviting and this poem is such beautiful and creative one..the environment voice is really speak loud by you here...keep writing, you got talent and keep polishing it_Unwritten Soul
great job on this piece you most care deeply for the environment
Good idea! Your creation is so helpful for nature.Great poem.....!
masterpiece thank u so much u truly care for our environment thank u so much....brilliant creativity masterpice Eindaray..keeep it up dear pal
Hi Eindaray, your poem strongly hammers on our callousness about our environment. Thanks for sharing such burning issue. Tapas, Kolkata, India.