For My Valentine Comments

The verses flow well together, and it is a unique poetical composition....keep writing..

You Held me in the crowd, And put my mind to rest. Beautiful. Keep writing.

Your valentine is very lucky, Sumann, and must be proud of you. Love and keep writing such beautiful poems. Best Wishes. Naseer

As in! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it was a little bit confusing in first read but when you follow the thoughts inside this poem is extravagant! ! ! ! ! ! ! i love it! sometimes those poem that is short is much alluring than the long one! 1