Saturday, September 7, 2013

For My Love Comments

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Why should I close my eyes?
When I don’t want to see a dream
Why should I twist my lips?
When I need a face that looks grim
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2013

a lot of questions asked. why should I take my pen to write. It is a release of emotions. a good release

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Princess Lilypad 08 September 2013

oh my how you seem heartsick. terrible, I feel for you. Such depths of despair we sink into over our hearts. This is good because it made me feel. thanks for writing!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2013

Again a wonderful write as if coming from heart. Sad poem...Heartfelt poem. By the time when you write 101st poem, a lovely and positive poem will come.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 07 September 2013

Very sad. Misfortune takes the strength away. But we are deep and must never let go. A bit despondent but the cry is heard. I like the tone and the sincerity in the poem. Mohabeer Beeharry

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