Tuesday, December 23, 2014

For My Lonely Cup Comments

Rating: 5.0

Behold the magic
My cup is nearly empty
Not too long ago however
It was brimming in juicy nectar
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Tushar Ray
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Roseann Shawiak 24 December 2014

Wow! An amazingly heart-felt poem, Tushar! Great rhythm and rhyme, with an honest and straightforward approach to your life. In this poem you have shared a part of yourself and it is very tender and touching, allowing us to see a side of your life, that I feel you don't often share. It's really beautiful and I feel a gentle resignation beneath your poetical words. I love how in the last verse, your spirit seems to come alive and be playful once again. Your poem is very quietly, inspiring a great deal! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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