Friday, September 13, 2013

For My Inspiration Comments

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I wish you would celebrate our love with words of romance
And not always say that I look into your eyes and find
More than words sweet and humble gestures that loudly pronounce
Your need for me so deep that the world mocks calling you blind!
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Abhishek Mishra 28 September 2013

Fabulous..last two lines are just awesome: -)

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Ajay Vyas 28 September 2013

well words r the best thing in which u can express ur feeling....gud work god bless u

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Ramesh Rai 26 September 2013

Loved the last two lines. the magic of poetry is well defined.

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Shraddha The Poetess 13 September 2013

a lovelyy poem.......and the rhyming scheme is fantastic......... i invite u to giv ur views on my poems also..

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Arpita Sud

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