I wish you would celebrate our love with words of romance
And not always say that I look into your eyes and find
More than words sweet and humble gestures that loudly pronounce
Your need for me so deep that the world mocks calling you blind!
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well words r the best thing in which u can express ur feeling....gud work god bless u
Loved the last two lines. the magic of poetry is well defined.
a lovelyy poem.......and the rhyming scheme is fantastic......... i invite u to giv ur views on my poems also..
Fabulous..last two lines are just awesome: -)