Sunday, June 18, 2006

For My Father (If Only Words Could Reconcile) Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could one last time make you smile
My blackened blood would run red,
and the guilt in my heart would at last be dead.
Secret memories hidden within family trees,
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Gina Onyemaechi 18 June 2006

Well-painted, heartfelt, and sad. There's a skill to relating emotions without letting them dominate and drag the poem down, Vincey. You've got this skill. Love, Gina.

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Esther Leclerc 18 June 2006

This poem holds much sorrow and not a little grace... truly affecting.

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