Friday, July 1, 2011

For My Dream Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

I believe lust and infatuation comes n goes
I also believe true love creeps up on you really slow
It stops in just to say hi leaving no chance to say goodbye
Catching you off guard and off your toes
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LC Ian MckayCarbajal
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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LC Ian MckayCarbajal

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El Charquito, San Luis Potosi, MX
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