Monday, March 10, 2008

For My Daughter: June 11,1969-August 15,1978 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Almost the middle of October.
It has rained for days.
No thunder.
Nothing grand or splashing,
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Will Thomas
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Original Unknown Girl 09 April 2008

This is a most beautiful poem, the way you convey your loss, the normality of the day but still with all the minute details of your surroundings. I love the click on and off of the heater and the day changing pink to purple. A wonderful tribute to your daughter, my heart goes out to you. HG: -) xx

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Lynda Robson 11 March 2008

I can feel your pain in this piece, time moves on, but sometimes the loss of a loved one makes time stand still for the bereaved. Very sorry for your loss Will, Lynda xx

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