Wednesday, February 25, 2009

For My Darling Comments

Rating: 5.0

To hold my darling and never let her go
Would be the easiest task I know
The words I pen for her are more than words, they are art
For this masterpiece I would use as paint blood from my own heart
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Vincent Dali
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 26 February 2009

Beautiful. I hope love works out for you. I can feel the love you have for this person and you're expressing it in a great way.

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Catrina Heart 25 February 2009

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! This is so nice...so loving and sweet dedication to your darling dearest...So heartwarming piece could melt a heart of a lady...Great metaphors and similes painted with beautiful imagery...10+++++

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