Sunday, May 31, 2009

For Molly Comments

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in the evening time
my mother so fresh
like a jasmine in bloom,
after a shower of rain,
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ritty patnaik
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Milica Franchi De Luri 18 August 2009

Mmmmm! I can smell that jasmine..... Ritti the simile in the first stanza is stunning, Compering your mum with a jasmine shows how much you love her, respect her. The rest of the poem speaks about how special your mother is, a loving and giving person who always puts the needs of others first....her love of gardens and flowers must have past them on to you... Milica

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Raj Nandy 04 August 2009

A LOVING AND A BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE TO MOTHER! 10! -Raj Nandy

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A beautiful description of motherhood

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