For Me Comments

When the tale-tell signs of sadness, have come for vengeance on your soul, When weariness becomes madness, when depression takes its toll. swweetly written, the way of writing is romantic and the expressin is very much poetic and impressive..heart feeling and soul touching effect..metaphor and can visualize too.. well done..liked it..10/10

it starts off like the lil story thing you just wrote, i like it, the end ties everything together nicely

Written with strength and encouragement. Well written and full of a positive message for hope. Nice. Deborah Cromer