Friday, June 29, 2012

For, Love Of Dawn... Comments

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Mist loiters with poignance
Enchanting near silence
With distant jubilance, beloved wood pigeon
Praise calls Dawn
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karen sinclair
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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 July 2012

Unveil her aura as a slow release So we may Observe Listen Smile Inhale her sweetest of scent Pure as crisp cool linen........................ Mists sigh of silence falling upon rosy fragrance Heart sates in the vale of beauty yet unveiled By love of dawn promise entices to brim unveiled Joy saunters into meandering eyes to reverberate.....................oh what a write etching fresh breath to follow., wonderful songs of passion promising to pledge,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Mist loiters with poignance Enchanting near silence With distant jubilance, beloved wood pigeon Praise calls Dawn Invites her welcoming gaze She adorns chiffon and lace Sheer elegance enters Eyes praise her dew dropp smile wow quite beautiful, sadly PH still has not fixed the extra p ruining your 'dew dropp smile' many of my poems have suffered a similar fate: (

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Robert Green 01 July 2012

A very enjoyable poem :)

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Subodh Pandey 30 June 2012

A lovely write a treat to read

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Danny Draper 30 June 2012

Romantic and spiritual, essence combined in a homage. Loved the linen reference, not much is as evocative as that, crisp clean and cool, and the new lover reference and promises unknown to yet unfold.

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Valerie Dohren 29 June 2012

Beautiful poem Karen, very descriptive and full of imagery.

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