Saturday, December 3, 2022

For Little Vyomi Comments

Rating: 4.4

Your innocent eyes
Soft rosy lips
Your pink skin
Even your baby- cries
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Bharati Nayak
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Congratulations, Bharati! This beautiful poem is ranked #16 among the The Best Members Poems today. It deserves to be No. One.

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Bri Edwards 04 January 2023

'Make me forget That I am an alien In this foreign land'......I believe Bharati is writing about lifting an infant relative while she visits her son in California in the USA. Bharati would be an 'alien' here. ;) bri

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Dear poetess, you have clearly expressed the genuine and immaculate feeling of a grandparent. The usage of hollowness is a golden feather.

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Hi Bharati, this poem is ranked #17 on the Best Member Poems today. Congratulations. Btw, have you seen my poem "Message of Peace 02"?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

This beautiful poem deserves 5 Stars TOP Score. Congratulations, dear poetess!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 December 2022

A well expressed and touching write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 December 2022

A very lovely poem expressing the utmost joy of being with a beautiful baby. Yes, indeed, a baby is a bundle of wonders and joy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2022

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as number 40 as The Best Member Poem by Member Poets. To My Favourites.5 Stars TOP Score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

Dear Bharati, this beautiful poem is today (18 Dec 2022) on rank number 21 of Best Poems by Member Poets, CONGRATS once again, such a loveliest worded powem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2022

The most beautiful poem I ever read today, dear Bharati poetess, I have enjoyed tremendously your loveliest words, Top Score and myriad more. To my Favourites. Thank you from my heart for sharing this Beauty, this Bundle of Joy

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2022

BRI, this poem deserves TOP Score and not just Four. You do not know what Beauty IS, do you? !

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Cowboy Ron Williams 05 December 2022

'When you lift in my arms' is NOT correct usage in British English or any other English. Sorry, USM. You are still a great guy.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 05 December 2022

The way Bri said it is correct, OR 'when I lift you in my arms' is fine also. Or you could just say 'when I pick you up by the scraggly hair on your chubby little head'.... : )

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 December 2022

Sweet poem, Bharati. May the little, beautiful Vyomi and you be filled with abundant happiness. God bless. To my favourite

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Nosheen Irfan 05 December 2022

Wo beautiful. I hope you are having the time of your life. Children are great company. Blessings for the child! Keep penning the precious moments!

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Really sweet writing. Loved the presentation. Congratulations, Bharati. Top score

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Rebecca Navarre 04 December 2022

Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 04 December 2022

Ever so very sweet! .. Praying much joy and many blessings for you and Vyomi in life! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 04 December 2022

Oh, How precious! .. Beautiful words of blessedness! ..

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Bri Edwards 04 December 2022

WELCOME to the USA! But I suggest using 'when I lift you INTO my ARMS' Hi, Vyomi. ;)

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I would prefer, "When you lift IN my arms." I think this is the correct usage in British English, though I am not an authority in it. Bri could be asking you to follow American English.

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Bri Edwards 04 December 2022

And THEN there will be 'the terrible TEENS! ! ! ! Yikes! : ))) bri

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