For Little Vyomi Comments
Your innocent eyes
Soft rosy lips
Your pink skin
Even your baby- cries
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'Make me forget That I am an alien In this foreign land'......I believe Bharati is writing about lifting an infant relative while she visits her son in California in the USA. Bharati would be an 'alien' here. ;) bri
Dear poetess, you have clearly expressed the genuine and immaculate feeling of a grandparent. The usage of hollowness is a golden feather.
Hi Bharati, this poem is ranked #17 on the Best Member Poems today. Congratulations. Btw, have you seen my poem "Message of Peace 02"?
This beautiful poem deserves 5 Stars TOP Score. Congratulations, dear poetess!
A very lovely poem expressing the utmost joy of being with a beautiful baby. Yes, indeed, a baby is a bundle of wonders and joy.
CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as number 40 as The Best Member Poem by Member Poets. To My Favourites.5 Stars TOP Score
Dear Bharati, this beautiful poem is today (18 Dec 2022) on rank number 21 of Best Poems by Member Poets, CONGRATS once again, such a loveliest worded powem
The most beautiful poem I ever read today, dear Bharati poetess, I have enjoyed tremendously your loveliest words, Top Score and myriad more. To my Favourites. Thank you from my heart for sharing this Beauty, this Bundle of Joy
BRI, this poem deserves TOP Score and not just Four. You do not know what Beauty IS, do you? !
'When you lift in my arms' is NOT correct usage in British English or any other English. Sorry, USM. You are still a great guy.
The way Bri said it is correct, OR 'when I lift you in my arms' is fine also. Or you could just say 'when I pick you up by the scraggly hair on your chubby little head'.... : )
Sweet poem, Bharati. May the little, beautiful Vyomi and you be filled with abundant happiness. God bless. To my favourite
Wo beautiful. I hope you are having the time of your life. Children are great company. Blessings for the child! Keep penning the precious moments!
Really sweet writing. Loved the presentation. Congratulations, Bharati. Top score
Ever so very sweet! .. Praying much joy and many blessings for you and Vyomi in life! ..
WELCOME to the USA! But I suggest using 'when I lift you INTO my ARMS' Hi, Vyomi. ;)
I would prefer, "When you lift IN my arms." I think this is the correct usage in British English, though I am not an authority in it. Bri could be asking you to follow American English.
And THEN there will be 'the terrible TEENS! ! ! ! Yikes! : ))) bri
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Congratulations, Bharati! This beautiful poem is ranked #16 among the The Best Members Poems today. It deserves to be No. One.