For Little Vyomi On Her First Birthday (12th June 2023) Comments
For Little Vyomi on Her First Birthday
(12th June 2023)
Your smile, so innocent, so cute
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Once again, this beautiful poem has re-entered the Best Poems of Members
Heartwarming poem by Granny with full of love and affection, Full Stars.
'....To be a loving and kind human being.' YES! May Vyomi grow up to be 'just like' ଜେଜେମା' Bharati! ! ! !
Thank you Bri for your many comments and stars.I again thank you for introducing the Odia word ଜେଜେମା in the place of Grand Mother.In English it will sound like 'J J Maa'.We have two different words for grandmothers for father's side and mther's side.
We call Grandmother of Mother's side as 'Aai' and Grandmother of father's side as 'J J Maa'Like wise Grandfathers of parents are called 'Ajaa' and 'J J Bapa' respectively.
'Do you want to tell, how you love me? ' I would 'lose' the comma. 'my glooms get vanished'? I'd change this, perhaps to 'my gloominess vanishes'.
I hope all of your well-meaning wishes for your grandchild are granted to everyone's satisfaction. bri ;)
Part of this sounds like a prayer, and if it is not, I'll bet you, Bharati, have done plenty of praying for your grandchild already. ;) bri
It seems as if this baby's smile is shining straight into your soul like a sunbeam, and for a moment you are like a planet orbiting that source of soul-light.
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7/19/2025 9:29:23 PM # 1.0.0
Very affectionate and highly impressive write Bharati. Best Wishes To Pretty Vyomi and You.May God keep you Both In Good Cheer Always.Thanks for this great poem